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Odyssey Events

Hi guys! 

I hope everyone’s finals are going marvelously! I know that I am so ready to be done and to be sitting in front of the tv bingeing on good television and crossing movies off of my must see list. I cannot wait.

Here is my list of FYOS events that I have been to:

1) The short film movie festival at Cine. 

2) My dad’s recital ( I already wrote about this)

3) Throughout the semester, I have been to the art galleries and Georgia Museum of Art numerous times. I am always really impressed by the gallery openings at Lamar Dodd that showcase student work. There are some amazingly talented students that go to the art school and it never seizes to amaze me that my peers and I could be showing our work one day in the same galleries. I went to the MMXI Student Juried Show gallery opening and was just dumbfounded by the pieces that were created. To this day, I still think about some of the sculptures and paintings and that is not only really crucial for my inspiration but it also shows the skill level of the artist. Leaving a piece is someone’s mind is his or her purpose and, ultimately, if I am still thinking about it months down the road, that artist has achieved his goal perfectly and powerfully. Sometimes I look at these works and think “how am I ever going to be able to think of things these weird one day?”, and, truth be told, that is a legitimate fear of mine. As years go on, art is becoming more and more conceptual, and, ultimately, the strange, creepy, bizarre, “what the hell” (a quote I have heard from many of my friends and fellow students) pieces are wait remains with the viewer over time. This is even something that has stuck with me about this seminar— the ideas that nobody else has really dictate the success of a short film or an exhibition. It has really forced me to channel my ideas and try to find my own personal weirdness and inspiration. 

In one of my trips to the Georgia Museum, I also saw the Hatch Print show. It was a compilation of brilliant letterpress prints that just blew me away. As I write this, I am getting goosebumps about that gallery. This really opened my eyes to the monumentality of creating prints and I am going to keep that medium and concentration in mind as I delve further into my art career. 

**I know this isn’t much but here is a video on the basics of letterpress if anyone is interested and for any bloggers out there ( I can’t be the only one, right?), that blog is amazing and is a constant source of inspiration for little old me. 

Thank you so much for everything! Everybody have a safe, relaxing and happy holiday!

Meep, HELP!

Hey Erin! I went to reread your short on elc, and it was not there! I was wondering if you could post it there so I could give it a solid critique?

ernxxx:

Make this better, please. 

Daniel’s Film

Hello Daniel!

 Your short is off to a good start! It was funny at times and touching at others.  The inclusion of your car was genius. I couldn’t have thought of a better car myself.

 There were a few things that could be done slightly differently to add more realism to your story. I felt as though the conversation between the old man and Riley was not as profound as it could have been. I don’t think a seventeen year old boy would seem as clueless regarding his beliefs on religion. Usually by that age, you have a firm sense of seeing what everybody else believes in and being able to formulate your own opinions. I would even see a non-believer scoffing at what the old man was saying to him. If you tone down the obviousness of the conversation and allow the boy to truly grasp what happened and what the old man is saying to him, the conversation would come across better. Also, I think it would benefit if the old man were more touched and was more emotional about the boy’s voluntary kindness. I am a firm believer that charging your characters up with emotions will always get the point across better. 

That is my largest criticism. Reworking the car scene and conversation could tremendously better your film. I also agree that the voiceover can be nixed. It is not necessary because we can understand what Riley is doing.

Critique my screenplay!

Hello Tabitha! I thought that your short was a fresh take on subject that could be over used. From the creativity standpoint, you did a fantastic job in thinking of an interesting story line. There were a few things throughout your script that I thought could have been done differently.  I adored how much you could see that the husband genuinely loved Judy, but I felt as if the dialogue was a little too forced and repetitive. Maybe if you made the conversation seem more organic and natural, their relationship would flow together perfectly. Also, I realize that it is difficult to nail emotions on the head, your script needed more of the emotional responses of the characters. Your film would be much more poignant if you were able to portray the exasperated worry of the husband and the confusion/sadness/worry of the wife.  If these emotions were read on the faces of the actors, the film would be so incredibly more touching to the viewer. 

One more thing that I wish had been done differently was the inclusion of the children. Because you just mentioned them, I barely even remembered she had children. Maybe you should include them into a flashback or had them visiting her in the hospital room. The emotional struggle of Judy would be infinitely more difficult if she had children. I believe their role in this short is important, but your execution of their existence could be improved.

All in all, this is a very great start! 

tabuga:

Hey guys. I’m posting this so everyone can reblog and critique me or whatever. If you don’t remember which one is mine, it was the one about the woman who is married but falls in love with a man she met in a dream, and he ends up being the one who hit her in the car accident, but she still loves him. Critique away!

Critiques

Hi guys, 

I am pretty sure that you are supposed to reblog this with your critiques.

but that might not be correct.

I am a little dense when it comes to tumblr.

But, anyways, thank you for your critiques and ideas! 

FYOS event

This past Wednesday, I went to my father’s recital. 

It was marvelous.

I was blown away by a song called “Send in the Clowns” from A Little Night Music. It was so beautiful and heart breaking. 

(here is a barbra cover if any one is interested)

It is always incredibly refreshing to see such incredible talent. Although growing up in a house with inspiring musical talent, I never learned how to play an instrument. And, even though at times I feel bitter for not learning, I am still so incredibly thankful to be from a household where my father followed his passion. Although playing a tuba is not practical, I can honestly say that my father is happiest when he is working because it is one of those things that he loves the most. 

This concert gave me a sense of faith about my college career. Yes, being in art school is not practical, but at this very moment, there is nothing else I would rather be doing. And even though there is this stigma that you have to accept being homeless in the art school, being creative is what makes me who I am. Seeing raw talent like my father’s makes me believe that, with hard work and passion, I will make it through life content and satisfied. And that is a monumental realization for little ole me. 

I suggest that anybody and everybody should attend a performing arts recital. It may give you a lot more than you expected.

Top 5

This is really difficult decision and I do not think I can narrow it down to just a top one, so here are my five favorite shorts in no specific order

1) Cash Back

2) The Last Farm

3) The Incident

4) Morning Fall

5) The Crush

and I cannot forget The Legend of Beaver Dam. That film has just really stuck with me because I just loved it that much. 

also, honorable mention to Six Shooter. I don’t think it is top five but it is definitely up there. 

Doodlebug by Christopher Nolan

Eh, I am not this film’s biggest fan. The beginning with the eyeballs lasted far too long and quickly became cheesy. It reminded me of a murder mystery party or something of the like. When the film spans to the man, I immediately think he is a drug addict or has a mental issue. 

Nolan does a very excellent job in creating the eerie atmosphere with the off putting music and drastic shadows and darkness of the man. I rewatched the short to see if the man paralleled the small man the whole time, but it was only at the end where his actions were slightly delayed from the actions of the small man.

I do like the twist of this short, it is just not my favorite. Because he is running from the bigger man, I understood his insanity and anxiety by the end.

I’m not entirely sure of the phone call. What if the man was expecting the little man to call him? That’s what I took from his disappointment and irrational behavior when it was not who he expected or wanted. This detail left me a little flustered.

This short was okay in my books. Not my favorite, but it certainly has a very interesting plotline and twist.  

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The Incident 

The Incident is an incredible breathtaking short with such emotional baggage, beautiful cinematography and fascinating acting. I was left stewing the traumatic details of this film well after is ended, and, it is safe to say, will think about it more tomorrow as the day goes on. I found myself thinking throughout the entire film what I would do if that situation occurred to me and I have no idea. What would anybody do? The rational human being says “i would call 911”, but you never know what you would do in such an emotional, heart-wrenching situation. 

However, as I watched Michal  cross the bridge in the last brief moments of the short, I had this grand realization that none of this may have happened. Yes, on the surface the events literally occurring still provide the viewer with emotional tension and metaphorical ideas, but if the man was a figment of Michal’s imagination, the viewer has a glimpse into the deep psyche of Michal and his issues of living in a “grown-up” world. 

From the beginning we could tell that Michal was at a standstill. He was always happy when he was with his woman, but she was moving on, getting a job, and living her own life. His lack of knowledge about his future career made him entirely anxious and defeated. So as his wife/girlfriend goes to her real life job, Michal is left to ponder why is at the house, why he is not working and why he is not receiving these stellar opportunities. I found a grand significance in the juxtaposition of the  golden, sparkliness of the park in fall and Michal’s grim appearance, dark outfit and attitude. He was literally surrounded by this golden wonderland, but internally, he was stewing in his bad mood. And as he sits on the seat, his conscience, the grumpy bike man, comes along and verbally attacks Michal, bringing attention to his moody blues. 

Michal tries to avoid his conscience by shoving it away and it causes more damage than he intended. He now had to look at his life and figure out the way in which to hide his fear and morbid attitude.

He “drags” it into the woods and hopes this is an adequate place for him to avoid rational thinking and expressing his beliefs to everybody around him. It isn’t adequate. I do notice, however, that whenever he is with his girlfriend, he feels at home and puts on this show to convince her that he is okay. Deep down, the “dead body ” (his conscience) is weighing him down, so he revisits his feelings. He doesn’t like them, he covers them up more. He goes back, he searches for the reason why he should come to terms with his sadness and why he is scared. Then, he finds the image of the man’s wife and is reminded profoundly of his own love interest. She is a reason to revisit his conscience. 

In the end, when he finally cracks and his fear about life comes through, he gets over the fact that he needs to revisit his conscience because he did what his conscience had been nagging him to do the whole time. 

This is just an idea. there are some flaws in it, but I jut felt this deep urge that it could be a possibility for the film. 

That being said, both sides of the story are justifiable and incredible nonetheless.  I really enjoyed the details of the man watching cartoons and the laughing cellphone ring and crying baby. The man watches the cartoons to almost regain some of his innocence. He wanted to forget the pain of the dead man or the weight of his grown up conscience, so he watched cartoons. The laugh was also very significant to me because he turns it off and almost seconds later a baby starts crying in the background. He pushes the innocent jovial laugh aside and a sobbing, upset noise enters. 

I really liked everything about this film. It is remarkable in every way. 

Bean Cake by David Greenspan

Its the little things in life. For me, a perfectly concocted cup of coffee, Dexter marathons, a successful trip at goodwill, and pumpkin bread are some of the things that make me happiest. For Taro, it is red bean cakes. 

Whenever it was my first day of school, my mom would always make me my favorite breakfast to calm my anxious back to school jitters. I immediately connected to Taro because his mom made him his favorite food before his big first day of school. Also, the viewers can relate to Taro because he was the awkward looking kid that wore goofy clothes to his first day of school. All of us have memories of being the odd one out that is made a spectacle of in front of their class. It’s part of life. 

What I really enjoyed most about this short was the storyline. This storyline, although common and overused, was made unique by including japanese culture. There will always be the kind, considerate friend to be by your side, but, usually, this plot doesn’t come with the struggle of worshipping an emperor or having communist ideals. That adds a heavy struggle to the shoulders of this already uncomfortable day for Taro. 

The film work of this piece was well down and made the transition to the past much easier. 

In the end, Taro finally found the courage to change his beliefs due to the girl’s willingness to be kind and warmhearted towards him. He still has those little things that make him happy (like those delicious bean cakes), but he realizes that in order to make others happy, he must accept the truth of the world around him.

I enjoyed this short thoroughly. 

(Source: youtube.com)

Post-It Love 

This short is adorable. Everything sums up perfectly to create this cutesy love story: the music, the characters, and post-it-art. 

The music was the main thing that i noticed about this story. It reminded me very much of fairies and unicorns, thus I knew this short would not be sad and painfully depressing within the first five seconds of the film. That is a grand power for the music to carry and it is used brilliantly.

The other thing that I loved so much about this short was the ability to have two characters to show eachother they are in love without speaking a single word. The director focuses on the emotional reactions of these two lovebirds, and, although that is a difficult thing to act out, these two actors embody the emotions of falling in love to a t. Watching the joy spread across every square inch of the woman’s face was pure magic and the perfect way in which to end this film.

The use of a boring, day-to-day office supply to depict the blossoming adoration was also very fun to me. Nobody ever thinks of sticky notes as a way to paint a picture, but they prove that they are the perfect way to brighten up their workspace. 

Awkward office romances always appeal to me ( Jim and Pam had me hooked from the first episode), so I am not at all surprised that this short made my day. It may not be my favorite for its lack of deep thematic detail and information that make me ponder life, but it is a wonderful and very effective short film.

(Source: youtube.com)

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